Small raw poem - Page 1

God  in your  incredible creation

I am in you , you are in me,

God you have given me everything even before I "ask"

But I have kept everything  Behind "Mask"

Thus increasing your "task"

To unveil the "Mask"

I follow my growth "Instinct"

Making things I have,  "Extinct"

I want to become a Great "Creature"

But being far from "nature"

Has left me with no "future"

Oh God where am I heading to

Forgetting you , Forgetting me.

Few more thoughts from me :-

"Be humble so that you don't stumble"

Truth is bitter but it is sweeter too as it keeps us rooted so that we don't get uprooted.

My age is giving away my black hair look

But WoW !!! It is giving me too a "Different Natural Look".

"Be happy the way you look"

Time fools me

Weather fools me

Situations fool me

Maid servant fools me

Shopkeeper fools me

Milkman fools me

The list goes on ..................

Finally the climax is

I fool myself

Thinking

"I am the smartest"

Few more thoughts from me,

I have everything

as God has given me everything

I am something

as I have "some" person in my life who is always with me

I can do anything

Which also requires a thing

So logically and actually

"I am nothing"

 Nice ones Tanuja ! 

 Hmm!  You seem to be a budding poet. Do go deeper in your thoughts and you will be able to unravel more such poetry and more such wonderful thoughts.

Keep them coming.

Fayaz

Dear Mickey and Zayaf,

Thanks  Mickey and Zayaf for your encouraging reply too. Yes Zayaf I will go deeper into my thoughts  to unravel new poems and thoughts.

Regards

Tanujaravi

 Hi Tanuja, I agree with Zayaf. Keep writing ...exploring n experimenting...........

Zayaf (Fayaz) is very good poet and writer too. 

You could check out  wonderful poems written by him in his website. A very humble n creative person to the core, i must admit.

http://www.vrwinners.com/ 

Cheers !
Mickey

Hi Mickey,

Thanks for  zayaf 's website. I will surely explore and  experiment.

Regards

Tanuja